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hey what do you guys think of this poem/letter i wrote to the girl i hurt
I'm sorry,
For all the fighting,
Just want to make it through,
Because I don't wanna lose you,
I'm too in love with you,
Why can't we just get along,
Like we usually do?
I'm sorry,
I love you,
And I knew you loved me too,
please lets make it through,
Because I can't live without you,
Can we just try?
Because we know we can,
Don't wanna give up,
Too hard to do,
Because there's no one like you,
I love you....
WITH ALL MY HEART!
i remember holding you while you threw up.
i remember the tears that came down my eyes
on the night of eid when you told me about your
stomach.i remember the great times when we
would hold each other like no other.
i remember your words.
the day i stop being there
for you is the day i close my
eyes forever.i remember
that you told me that no other girl
can love me like you.
i remember you saying how excited
you are for my baptisem.
how you want to read the bible togther.
how we would go to church togther.
how we would grow togther.
how i wanted you to be the girl
i defined as the word forever.
you out of my life is tearing me apart
just like when my mom burned my
baby pictures in front of me.
my life is hell.just like how i
put you through hell.i am sorry.
as i saw those pictures burn
now its the same image as you
have left my life this is how my world
looks.
black, burned,tarnished.
i made a mistake
i did not mean it.
my needs mean nothing to me
as long as i give what you want
is all i ever need.
the tears that fall down my eyes
represent the buring hole in my heart.
you were my heart.but you got out.
i have a big gapping hole in my life.
because my life was gone the day
you left.i sit here and speak from
my broken heart.i am giving you
the final peaces to my heart.
you are the savior but also.
you can also shatter the final peaces.
my love for you will be forever.
as i sit here and regret what i
did to you forever.
my words are from this broken heart.
how is it with you out of my life?
a person needing a kidney.
someone in need of a heart transplant.
we use to be like a plant.
then the winter came.
but the ray was the hope that kept
the plant alive till spring.
i am praying that you are that ray
because i am crumbling fast and
need you to save me.
im sorry for the hurt i caused you.
i love you and need you.
there is no words to describe how strong the feeling
is but i love you so much.
im sorry i hurt you.please remember all the good times
please remember the e.,,, who would do anything for your
happiness.who would sacriface his life for you.
you made me the richest person in the world
i saw your smile.i felt your touch.
i felt your hug.i felt your heart beat.
i saw your eyes.i wiped your tears.
through the darkest of times your eyes
will always be in my mind.your touch
will always make me shiver.
and i will always remember you on a cold day.
you are my everything.
i thought i could never love again.
but god gave me you.
please forgive me.
i need you.
i love you.
please see that we can make it.
we can be something special.
but you hold the decison.
i pray for the best.
i love you
d
yes this is the same girl i hurt and this is the letter i wrote her..i know it is long sorry =(
For all the fighting,
Just want to make it through,
Because I don't wanna lose you,
I'm too in love with you,
Why can't we just get along,
Like we usually do?
I'm sorry,
I love you,
And I knew you loved me too,
please lets make it through,
Because I can't live without you,
Can we just try?
Because we know we can,
Don't wanna give up,
Too hard to do,
Because there's no one like you,
I love you....
WITH ALL MY HEART!
i remember holding you while you threw up.
i remember the tears that came down my eyes
on the night of eid when you told me about your
stomach.i remember the great times when we
would hold each other like no other.
i remember your words.
the day i stop being there
for you is the day i close my
eyes forever.i remember
that you told me that no other girl
can love me like you.
i remember you saying how excited
you are for my baptisem.
how you want to read the bible togther.
how we would go to church togther.
how we would grow togther.
how i wanted you to be the girl
i defined as the word forever.
you out of my life is tearing me apart
just like when my mom burned my
baby pictures in front of me.
my life is hell.just like how i
put you through hell.i am sorry.
as i saw those pictures burn
now its the same image as you
have left my life this is how my world
looks.
black, burned,tarnished.
i made a mistake
i did not mean it.
my needs mean nothing to me
as long as i give what you want
is all i ever need.
the tears that fall down my eyes
represent the buring hole in my heart.
you were my heart.but you got out.
i have a big gapping hole in my life.
because my life was gone the day
you left.i sit here and speak from
my broken heart.i am giving you
the final peaces to my heart.
you are the savior but also.
you can also shatter the final peaces.
my love for you will be forever.
as i sit here and regret what i
did to you forever.
my words are from this broken heart.
how is it with you out of my life?
a person needing a kidney.
someone in need of a heart transplant.
we use to be like a plant.
then the winter came.
but the ray was the hope that kept
the plant alive till spring.
i am praying that you are that ray
because i am crumbling fast and
need you to save me.
im sorry for the hurt i caused you.
i love you and need you.
there is no words to describe how strong the feeling
is but i love you so much.
im sorry i hurt you.please remember all the good times
please remember the e.,,, who would do anything for your
happiness.who would sacriface his life for you.
you made me the richest person in the world
i saw your smile.i felt your touch.
i felt your hug.i felt your heart beat.
i saw your eyes.i wiped your tears.
through the darkest of times your eyes
will always be in my mind.your touch
will always make me shiver.
and i will always remember you on a cold day.
you are my everything.
i thought i could never love again.
but god gave me you.
please forgive me.
i need you.
i love you.
please see that we can make it.
we can be something special.
but you hold the decison.
i pray for the best.
i love you
d
yes this is the same girl i hurt and this is the letter i wrote her..i know it is long sorry =(
Comments
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mahraeel
plzz p4m sister in Christ
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mahraeel
plzzz p4m sister in Christ
i did not mean it...im sorry for the hurt i caused you.... im sorry i hurt you...
so if you have done a mistake..did you like try to fix it
but hey the poem is really nice and touching
pray
yes i have tried to fix it by giving her this letter or poem lol she has not recived it yet i am waiting for her friend to give it to her when she sees her
no i mean the poem is a way to show that you are sorry but was there like a problem and you fix it. For example, a girl broke up with her friend because he was not taking school too serious. so the Friend to show that he is serious about his studies, he REregistered for classes and did not drop. It might be a bad example but do you get the point
Pray
Fast exampe. if you are a father and your son asks you to play with fire or hold a knife. would you let him? The child will than cry and cry and ask for it but you would never give him a knife to play with. and this is how we are. we ask and ask for stuff but maybe it is not suitable for us to have them.
Just pray and God already knows whats best for you. He chose you
Btw the poem is very touching. VEry nice i like it=)
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mahraeel
plzzz p4m sister in CHrist
I don't know ur situation but a poem rarely works. A love poem is for a fiction book. It is my personal view and plus heard from many. It is always good to express ur love through ur deeds than on paper espcially in a relationship.
Keep ur love in ur heart. If it is real it will be a spring for ur deeds. I have seen many cases but ppl generally r not humble enough to carry the load of being told " I love u ". Help them by not telling them their worth. I mean, love can be said in many ways than words.
And I am not sure if u just can summerize the peom and tell her in person than sending her letters.
But always pray if ur relationship is God's will.
May God be there for u in His Way.
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mahraeel
plzz p4m sister in Christ